First, we lose the beauty and the charm of verse. This is a serious loss. Poetry and verse are not the same thing, but they are so intimately related that it is difficult to divide them. Indeed, according to certain definitions of poetry, it would seem almost impossible.
Yet who will deny that the Psalms as we have them in the English Bible are really and truly poetical6?
The only way out of this difficulty that I can see is to distinguish between verse as the formal element and imaginative emotion as the essential element in poetry. In the original production of a
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poem, it seems to me, it is just to say that the embodiment in metrical language is a law of art which must be observed. But in the translation of a poem (which is a kind of reflection of it in a mirror) the verse may be lost without altogether losing the spirit of the poem.
Take an illustration from another art. A statue has the symmetry of solid form. You can look at it from all sides, and from every side you can see the balance and rhythm of the parts. In a photograph this solidity of form disappears. You see only a flat surface. But you still recognize it as the reflection of a statue.
The Psalms were undoubtedly8 written, in the original Hebrew, according to a system of versification, and perhaps to some extent with forms of rhyme.
The older scholars, like Lowth and Herder, held that such a system existed, but could not be recovered. Later scholars, like Ewald, evolved a system of their own. Modern scholarship, represented by such authors as Professors Cheyne and Briggs, is reconstructing and explaining more accurately9 the
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Hebrew versification. But, for the present at least, the only thing that is clear is that this system must remain obscure to us. It cannot be reproduced in English. The metrical versions of the Psalms are the least satisfactory. The poet Cowley said of them, “They are so far from doing justice to David that methinks they revile10 him worse than Shimei.”[5] We must learn to appreciate the poetry in the Psalms without the aid of those symmetries of form and sound in which they first appeared. This is a serious loss. Poetry without verse is like a bride without a bridal garment.
The second thing that we lose in reading the Psalms in English is something even more important. It is the heavy tax on the wealth of its meaning, which all poetry must pay when it is imported from one country to another, through the medium of translation.
The most subtle charm of poetry is its suggestiveness; and much of this comes from the magical power which words acquire over memory and imagination, from their associations. This intimate and
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personal charm must be left behind when a poem passes from one language to another. The accompaniment, the harmony of things remembered and beloved, which the very words of the song once awakened11, is silent now. Nothing remains12 but the naked melody of thought. If this is pure and strong, it will gather new associations; as, indeed, the Psalms have already done in English, so that their familiar expressions have become charged with musical potency13. And yet I suppose such phrases as “a tree planted by the rivers of water,” “a fruitful vine in the innermost parts of the house,” “the mountains round about Jerusalem,” can never bring to us the full sense of beauty, the enlargement of heart, that they gave to the ancient Hebrews. But, in spite of this double loss, in the passage from verse to prose and from Hebrew to English, the poetry in the Psalms is so real and vital and imperishable that every reader feels its beauty and power.
It retains one valuable element of poetic7 form. This is that balancing of the parts of a sentence, one against another, to which Bishop14 Lowth first gave the familiar name of “parallelism.”[6] The effect of
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this simple artifice15, learned from Nature herself, is singularly pleasant and powerful. It is the rise and fall of the fountain, the ebb16 and flow of the tide, the tone and overtone of the chiming bell. The two-fold utterance17 seems to bear the thought onward18 like the wings of a bird. A German writer compares it very exquisitely19 to “the heaving and sinking of the troubled heart.”
It is this “parallelism” which gives such a familiar charm to the language of the Psalms. Unconsciously, and without recognizing the nature of the attraction, we grow used to the double cadence20, the sound and the echo, and learn to look for its recurrence21 with delight.
O come let us sing unto the Lord;
Let us make a joyful22 noise to the rock of our salvation23,
Let us come before his presence with thanksgiving;
And make a joyful noise unto him with psalms.
If we should want a plain English name for this method of composition we might call it thought-rhyme. It is easy to find varied24 illustrations of its beauty and of its power to emphasize large and simple ideas.
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Take for instance that very perfect psalm2 with which the book begins—a poem so complete, so compact, so delicately wrought25 that it seems like a sonnet26. The subject is The Two Paths.
The first part describes the way of the good man. It has three divisions.
The first verse gives a description of his conduct by negatives—telling us what he does not do. There is a triple thought-rhyme here.
Blessed is the man that walketh not in the counsel of the ungodly,
Nor standeth in the way of sinners,
Nor sitteth in the seat of the scornful.
The second verse describes his character positively27, with a double thought-rhyme.
But his delight is in the law of the Lord;
And in his law doth he meditate28 day and night.
The third verse tells us the result of this character and conduct, in a fourfold thought-rhyme.
He shall be like a tree planted by the rivers of water:
That bringeth forth29 his fruit in his season:
His leaf also shall not wither30:
And whatsoever31 he doeth shall prosper32.
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The second part of the psalm describes the way of the evil man. In the fourth verse there is a double thought-rhyme.
The ungodly are not so:
But are like the chaff33 which the wind driveth away.
In the fifth verse the consequences of this worthless, fruitless, unrooted life are shown, again with a double cadence of thought, the first referring to the judgment34 of God, the second to the judgment of men.
Therefore the ungodly shall not stand in the judgment:
Nor sinners in the congregation of the righteous.
The third part of the psalm is a terse35, powerful couplet, giving the reason for the different ending of the two paths.
For the Lord knoweth the way of the righteous:
But the way of the ungodly shall perish.
The thought-rhyme here is one of contrast.
A poem of very different character from this brief, serious, impersonal36 sonnet is found in the Forty-sixth Psalm, which might be called a National
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Anthem37. Here again the poem is divided into three parts.
The first part (verses first to third) expresses a sense of joyful confidence in the Eternal, amid the tempests and confusions of earth. The thought-rhymes are in couplets; and the second phrase, in each case, emphasizes and enlarges the idea of the first phrase.
God is our refuge and strength:
A very present help in trouble.
The second part (verses fourth to seventh) describes the peace and security of the city of God, surrounded by furious enemies, but rejoicing in the Eternal Presence. The parallel phrases here follow the same rule as in the first part. The concluding phrase is the stronger, the more emphatic38. The seventh verse gives the refrain or chorus of the anthem.
The Lord of hosts is with us:
The God of Jacob is our refuge.
The last part (verses eighth to tenth) describes in a very vivid and concrete way the deliverance of the people that have trusted in the Eternal. It begins with a couplet, like those which have gone
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before. Then follow two stanzas39 of triple thought-rhymes, in which the thought is stated and intensified40 with each repetition.
He maketh wars to cease unto the end of the earth:
He breaketh the bow, and cutteth the spear in sunder41:
He burneth the chariot in the fire.
Be still, and know that I am God:
I will be exalted42 among the heathen:
I will be exalted in the earth.
The anthem ends with a repetition of the refrain.
A careful study of the Psalms, even in English, will enable the thoughtful reader to derive43 new pleasure from them, by tracing the many modes and manners in which this poetic form of thought-rhyme is used to bind44 the composition together, and to give balance and harmony to the poem.
Another element of poetic form can be discerned in the Psalms, not directly, in the English version, but by its effects. I mean the curious artifice of alphabetic45 arrangement. It was a favourite practice among Hebrew poets to begin their verses with the successive letters of the alphabet, or sometimes
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to vary the device by making every verse in a strophe begin with one letter, and every verse in the next strophe with the following letter, and so on to the end. The Twenty-fifth and the Thirty-seventh Psalms were written by the first of these rules; the One Hundred and Nineteenth Psalm follows the second plan.
Of course the alphabetic artifice disappears entirely46 in the English translation. But its effects remain. The Psalms written in this manner usually have but a single theme, which is repeated over and over again, in different words and with new illustrations. They are kaleidoscopic47. The material does not change, but it is turned this way and that way, and shows itself in new shapes and arrangements. These alphabetic psalms are characterized by poverty of action and richness of expression.
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1 psalms | |
n.赞美诗( psalm的名词复数 );圣诗;圣歌;(中的) | |
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3 precisely | |
adv.恰好,正好,精确地,细致地 | |
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n.评价;欣赏;感谢;领会,理解;价格上涨 | |
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n.经商方法,待人态度 | |
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6 poetical | |
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8 undoubtedly | |
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10 revile | |
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11 awakened | |
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